Brian S. Hook
Jul 8, 2024

Amazing work (again), Melissa. I enjoy your poetic gift.

I've never heard "treachery" as a collective noun of ravens, but they seem to gather unfavorable ones: a "conspiracy," an "unkindness." Treachery does them no better favors! But it works perfectly for your poem.

Brian S. Hook
Brian S. Hook

Written by Brian S. Hook

Dad, classicist, mountain dweller, erstwhile triathlete, wannabe woodworker, follower of Socrates and Jesus (two famous non-writers), writing to avoid raveling

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