Brian S. Hook
Jun 21, 2024

And yet, brother, that kind of story haunts this one throughout, and deepens it, and makes your last line one of the more tear-eliciting lines I've read on Medium. Here are kids being kids, but their play is a respite from the struggle that could claim them the next week, or month, or year. Most kids, I imagine, "play" at killing and dying--I know I did--but this game distracted them from their very real struggle. That poignancy is just powerful. Beautifully, beautifully done.

I'll see you for a beer in a couple of hours. Looking forward to it.

Brian S. Hook
Brian S. Hook

Written by Brian S. Hook

Dad, classicist, mountain dweller, erstwhile triathlete, wannabe woodworker, follower of Socrates and Jesus (two famous non-writers), writing to avoid raveling

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