Brian S. Hook
Jun 2, 2024

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Brilliant sustained use of the concept, Maria, with creative images and metaphors with a pitch perfect ending. Just wonderful.

And in case it's more autobiographical than you wish, here's hope to leave that painted face on the wall and return to a normal-nosed life!

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Brian S. Hook
Brian S. Hook

Written by Brian S. Hook

Dad, classicist, mountain dweller, erstwhile triathlete, wannabe woodworker, follower of Socrates and Jesus (two famous non-writers), writing to avoid raveling

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