Brian S. Hook
Jun 28, 2024

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Charity, another finely detailed, well-paced, excellent story. You have a real gift of description and a way of choosing details perfectly to fill out scenes and characters. The postal Jeep, the Hummel figurines: perfect.

I didn't expect the ending, either. I didn't really know what to expect, but certainly not that Joe would grow and expand. There was something very satisfying in that.

Very well done, again.

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Brian S. Hook
Brian S. Hook

Written by Brian S. Hook

Dad, classicist, mountain dweller, erstwhile triathlete, wannabe woodworker, follower of Socrates and Jesus (two famous non-writers), writing to avoid raveling

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