Brian S. Hook
Nov 29, 2022

I agree with you completely, Shane, but it seems to be a minority opinion on the site. I have leveled some criticism but refrained from most of it. Instead of suggesting improvements, I ask questions. Many of those questions are sincere, that is, I really want to know something more about what the author thinks or means. But some of them are roundabout ways of pointing to something that needs clarification, or that I disagree with.

So feel free to point out ways that I can make my writing better!

Brian S. Hook
Brian S. Hook

Written by Brian S. Hook

Dad, classicist, mountain dweller, erstwhile triathlete, wannabe woodworker, follower of Socrates and Jesus (two famous non-writers), writing to avoid raveling

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