Okay, now I see how Flash Fiction is done, A.A.

…er, searching his face for time they may not have. He’s not good at goodbyes, or hellos really, and he never really learned how to say, “I love you,” in a way that his family can hear. But he can pack the snack and suitcases. He can print the maps and call the cat sitter. He can giv…
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Okay, now I see how Flash Fiction is done, A.A. This is brilliant. I felt the contours of the relationship expanding and deepening, and then this observation dropped and added a whole emotional landscape. Wow.
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Written by Brian S. Hook2.9K Followers
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Dad, classicist, mountain dweller, erstwhile triathlete, wannabe woodworker, follower of Socrates and Jesus (two famous non-writers), writing to avoid raveling
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